Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in a digital world. Computers have become a norm for a daily life these days. But still some people believe using computers every single day, is harmful for children.

However

, I personally don't agree with that assessment.

Firstly

, the education system is evolving with

modernization

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the modernization

of our society. Computers and other digital instruments have become a very integral part of that system.

This

makes it somewhat mandatory for the kids to have the basic knowledge of these devices.

For example

,

lot

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a lot

lots

of schools offer computer language fundamentals or programming classes to students. These help

cultivate

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cultivates

interest in pursuing the technical career, at a younger age.

Secondly

, I would agree that computers are not always used for educational

purposesm but

Accept comma addition

purposes, but

purposes but

that doesn't imply that they always have

adverse effect

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an adverse effect

on young ones.

On the contrary

, some of the recent researches show that certain computer based games are actually good for their brain development. It teaches them skills like planning, time management, team building and other analytical skills.

Lastly

, learning is an evolving process and should not be

restrcited

subject to restriction or subjected to restriction

restricted

to only textbooks.

Internet

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The internet

opens up a world of possibilities to

lern

gain knowledge or skills

learn

new skills and gain knowledge, if used wisely.

In other words

, imagine having no access to online libraries or articles to learn different talents, which are not always part of the school curriculum. Computers are

necessary part

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a necessary part

of life starting from the grocery stores to banks to all handheld devices. Learning to use them at an early age gives them advantage to succeed in life.