Nowadays, environment protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual person can do nothing to protect the environment its only government and big companies responsibilities to protect the environment and make a difference. I think that every individual do a lot of thing to protect the environment.

Nowadays, environmental protection has become a major concern for
thepublic
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the public
. There are some people
that
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who
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think that individual people can not do very much to protect our
environment
, but that only
government
and large enterprises can bring about changes I think that every individual can do a lot of
things
to protect the
environment
.
To begin
, every individual is able to protect the
environment
by doing small
things
.
For example
,
everyone
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if everyone
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saves one paper a day,
then
billions of
tree
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trees
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are saved, so it makes a huge difference in
country
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the country
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to protect
environment
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the environment
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.
However
,
i
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apply
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there are some
things
that only
government
and large
companies
can do as they have the money and resources to do them. The point I am trying to make is that . governments can implement rules, which an individual cannot do, and
also
banplastic
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ban plastic
bags and disposal methods, to protect the
environment
.
In addition
, big
companies
have the money to run an environmentalist NGO which could do
a lots
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a lot
lots
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of
things
like planting trees and cleaning public areas like railway stations,
shopping
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and shopping
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malls and
also
make people aware of the situation.It is true that only
individual
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individuals
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are not able to do everything to protect the
environment
, but
also
government
and big
companies
make a contribution.
To conclude
, it is for
government
or big
companies
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companies'
company's
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duty to protect the
environment
but everyone can do lots of
things
to protect
te
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the
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environment
and make our country environmentally friendly.
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