Some people believe that the problem of illegal drugs can be solved by just legalizing all drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Problem

Suggestion

The problem

of drug usage has become prevalent in less than no time all over the world. In most parts of the world, drugs are not legalised yet people are consuming them one way or another. So, should drugs be legalised? Some people would agree to

this

while others would make conflict

Suggestion

that. I totally disagree

Suggestion

with

the statement that

problem

Suggestion

the problem

of illegal drugs can be resolved by legalising them. Let us assume that all drugs has been legalised and now everyone can take drugs anytime anywhere.

This

would create so much misery in the society that no one could imagine.

Youth

Suggestion

A youth

who has not been educated about

pros

Suggestion

the pros

and cons of consuming drugs will be most influenced by it. Making drugs legal overnight would not bring any solution to on-going issues rather it will escalate the troubles.

This

has to be done in a specific manner. Before legalising any drugs,

government

Suggestion

the government

must take care of

education part

Suggestion

the education part

of it.

In addition

to that, youth must be aware about

consequences

Suggestion

the consequences

overdose

Accept comma addition

overdose, otherwise

otherwise

this

decision would be devastating for young generation. It would be impossible to control the usage once it becomes legal. In

recent survey

Suggestion

a recent survey

done in Australia, it was found that 80 percent illegal drugs are taken by youth of age 15-28 while only 20 percent of other ages are involved. To conclude, I would say that in spite of making all drugs legal, a nation must focus on its education part by which people will be aware about

disadvantages

Suggestion

the disadvantages

of having drugs.

Thus

, I totally condemn the idea of legalising all drugs.

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