Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

Food
is the essential part of the human life.For
the good
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better
mental and physical development, it is necessary to take a good healthy
diet
. It is well said that "You become what you eat".Despite knowing
this
fact, most of the youngsters and adults are inclined to take unhealthy
diet
.In
this
essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will illustrate the causes that why many people
can not
can not
cannot
resist themselves in taking unhealthy
diet
, as well as the possible solutions to
this
problem.
Firstly
, the main cause of
this
problem is the busy lifestyle of the people nowadays.Due to less time and the lazy attitude of today's generation, they enjoy to relish adulterated
food
ordering at home or eating outside.People tend to eat more adulterated and fast
food
, as they feel very contented after eating lots of fats and carbohydrates.In recent times, it has
also
become easier
ordering fast
Accept comma addition
ordering, fast
food
online as many websites offer good discounts and the promotional coupon code.
Seconly
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Secondly
, In my country due to the higher rates of the healthy
food
, is is not affordable to every category.
For example
, Burger costs less than
juice
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the juice
, or eating noodles at a local shop is less expensive than eating
sweetcorns
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sweet corns
.
Finally
, In my opinion, the best solution for
this
problem is that the adulterated
food
which are heated at
the high
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higher
temperatures shall have more tax than healthy
food
. There should be subsidy on
the healthy
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healthier
food
options for the poor people, so that it can be reachable to them
also
.
Food
campaigns or advertisements should be organised by
media
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the media
and government about the importance of having a good healthy
diet
. To conclude, I would say that the
people
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person's
perspective can change their eating habits.It is
well known fact
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a well known fact
that health is wealth.
Inaddition
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In addition
to that,
government
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the government
can
also
help by imposing more tax on fast
food
and organising
food
campaigns or advertisements, so that people can understand the importance of
healthy
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a healthy diet
diet
.
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