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The table below shows the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day, from 1990 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day, from 1990 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the estimated
oil
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 capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day, from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, Saudi Arabia tops in all the years for the production of
oil
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. There has always been an increase in the manufacturing of
the
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oil
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 from 1990 to 2010. There is a dramatic increase from almost 12.3
million
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 in 2005 to 14.5
million
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 in 2010.Qatar places itself in the
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creation
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the creation
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 of
oil
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.
There
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 production has been consistently the same from 1990 to 2010 ranging between 0-2
million
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. There has been a slight surge in 2000. When compared to other nations Iraq significantly rises its level. They were maintaining their rate till 2005 between 0-2.3
million
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 which had a peak in 2010.Kuwait has
the
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 production somewhat similar to Iraq in the years 2000 and 2005.
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 had a gradual development in 2010. Iran was managing a standard between 0-4
million
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 till 2005 which had a slight increment in 2010.
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, UAE consistently places itself in a higher position. It is very clear that every country
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 Qatar has developed itself
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 to other years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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