A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the level of success is measured by means of social status, money and material possession. New terms
such
as 5C which stands for cars, credit cards, condominium, cash and career has become the universal standard even for a girl to look for her perfect
one
.
However
the society still refuses to accept
one
who is ruthless, dishonest or disrespectful. It shows gentleman values are always the core to evaluate a
person regardless
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person, regardless
how high
one
has thrived in
one
’s possession. Many times, people sought for good values in a person, regardless of being a friend, working colleagues, or life partner. It may not be
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mentioned
as
frequently
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frequent
, but
one
who
honors
a university degree with honors
honours
such
values will always be preferable. Many job interviews require not just work experience or education background, but two
referee
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referees
from previous jobs; it is to find out about the work ethic or what values the interviewee
honored
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
. Some companies even required their staff to sign
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additional contracts
an additional contract
of integrity to ensure the company latest development or business progression will not be jeopardized.
One
may not notice as much, but these values are always
honored
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
.
On the other hand
, good values are the virtue of a society.
One
who despises integrity or
dishonor
bring shame or dishonor upon
dishonour
will not thrive. People tend to choose leaders with good values and these leaders will always be remembered.
For example
, the former United States president, Barrack
Obama has been always
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Obama has always been
used to compare with the current president, as people could not tolerate a ruthless president. Kindness, honesty and compassion are the values that everyone seeks for. President Trump may be rich, but people still despise his attitude.
Although
people
tends
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tend
to get materialistic, and pursue high social status, but
such
values will always be important. It may seem as if a supplementary thing we look at in many
instance
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instances
, but these are always the values we seek for in our instinct. In my opinion,
such
values are always important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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