Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In modern life, we can see that
technology
has changed the way many people connect to each other so much. Technology
has changed not only communication but also
making relationships in many ways. In my opinion, this
has become both a positive and negative development.
Most of the ways technology
make
interacting with each other Suggestion
makes
of
people is Suggestion
with
such
as Internet, telephone, social networks, youtube
, TV, radio, Suggestion
YouTube
facetime
, Suggestion
Facetime
face time
livestream
, Suggestion
live stream
chat
online applications, …
With connecting to Accept space
…
Internet
, we do not need to be Suggestion
the Internet
face
to face
that we can still speak together. We can chat
online by messenger, mail, zalo
, hangouts, lines, …
Not only that, we can see and speak with each other by Accept space
…
facetime
, open meeting online. Suggestion
Facetime
Second
, using telephone, mobile phone, or smart phone make
people speak Suggestion
makes
togerther
easily, companies care business and interact with customers better. in contact with each other or in proximity
together
Third
, students can study in online learning websites that they do not need to go to class. Livestream
is also
used popularly to
business or share everything with people. And, companies can advertise for products and companies’s image through TV, radio, Suggestion
for
in
youtube
; we can Suggestion
YouTube
sharing
video which we own or enjoy for people to watch. Specially, social networks Suggestion
share
such
as Facebook, Instargram, Twitter, Zalo, …
help us connect to many people, share our personal statuses, experiences or discuss about problems and people can comment them. Topic of discussions could be literature, math, history, music, comic, novel, science, food, drink,Accept space
…
…
So, if we are interested in a topic we should take part in a group to debate Accept space
…
this
togerther
. in contact with each other or in proximity
together
Businessers
always create their sale page to post product Suggestion
Businesses
informations
, a message received and understood
information
chat
to customers to build relationship
and sell their products.
Not only is Suggestion
relationships
a relationship
technology
positive but also
negative with making the types of relationships. Due to technology
, we can speak with each other in anywhere that we need not meeting or being face
to face
. Making friends with people in the word
and connecting person to person is more easier. We can trade and keep good relationship with everything that exists anywhere
world
costomers
. someone who pays for goods or services
customers
Besides
that positivities, this
still brings negativities. With convenience
of Suggestion
the convenience
technology
, we do not want to go out to meet friends because we need to be online, log on Internet
that we can Suggestion
the Internet
chat
or speak together. Online meeting is virtual and not real, some people addict to use social networks, waste time for it, and do not care their real life that make
their relations worry. Because of online network, we can not check Suggestion
makes
quality
of products we want to buy that lead Suggestion
the quality
to
they are bad quality.
In conclusion, Suggestion
until
technology
is very important for us to contact, communicate and create and keep up relationships. It brings us many benefits but we should use it in right way
, not abuse it to avoid depending on it.Suggestion
the right way
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