New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Human lives have essentially been invaded by

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the wonders

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enormous physical occupations and chores previously done by humans have been replaced by machines.In my opinion the advantages of

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as there has been a massive invasion

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technology in almost all aspects of human life

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many activities performed by humans have greatly been

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practice spares people of many tasks

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it proves out to be very beneficial in saving precious time and efforts; which can be invested in other directions.

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allows people to spend more time with their family and

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relieves of weary physical and mental exertion

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health issues have

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significantly increased by

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the use

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the factor of human error is

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enabling to attain near perfection.

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after implementation of robotic surgeries the time duration has been halved

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to minimal invasion and precision of the surgical procedures.

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the disadvantages of handling over the human jobs to machines and gadgets are far less than their advantages.Since

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most of the machines performing the tasks run on batteries

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these need to be charged or replaced after a certain limit.

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they can carry out a task in a single way as they are fed by humans

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they are not able to cope according to

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the demands

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case of any emergency situation or a calamity humans are able to stop the ongoing work and move to a safer place

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whereas the machines will continue the assigned chore unless commanded to stop by someone. In compendium

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the provision of machines in different fields to perform duties of humans will bring in more benefit than harm.

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it should be implemented to get better results and to increase the efficiency.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

298 words

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New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Robot and AI are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Some people think it is better for children to being to learn a foreign language at primary school than at secondary school. What’s your opinion? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?