In many countries people are living in a throwaway society where things are used for a short time and thrown away what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

It is an irrefutable fact that people are buying new things very frequently and undoubtedly throwing away old but usable things. From my
perspective
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perspective, this
this
trend occurs due to various reasons and has negative impact on the
environment
. Though it is true that people are inclined to buy new things even though they have some product and
this
is due to irresistible advertisement. Manufactures promote their new product in the market and capitalize on the needs and wants of people.
For instance
, every year updated smart phones are
launch
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launched
by the company with slightly new features; people get attracted by the phone and buy it. The reason why people are habituated to
throwaway
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throw away
trend is because of busy life. People do not have time to fix thing that have stopped working.
Actually they
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Actually, they
believe that buying new stuff is easier than repairing it. Admittedly,
this
trend has become
serious issue
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a serious issue
of our
environment
. Excessive production of goods leads to the depletion of natural resources. Deforestation is an emerging issue which means that trees are
cutting
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cut
down to produce various household items.
This
is because of frequent change in the household furniture.
In
addition when
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addition, when
products are thrown
away they
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away, they
produce more garbage which releases some substance which are non biodegradable and remain in
soil
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the soil
forever.
Thus by
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Thus, by
throwing away goods we are unwillingly causing damage to the
environment
.
However when
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However, when
the issue is
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
and compared from various angles, I tend to believe that throwaway culture is a reflection of our materialistic mentality which would affect our
environment
. The government should launch campaigns to create awareness about the dangers of throwing away goods and
also
enact laws that make recycling mandatory.
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