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The table illustrates the data of native speakers among six languages as well as the
number
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 of speakers as an additional
language
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. Overall, the statistic of speakers of Mandarin Chinese is dramatically larger than the others. It is indicated that there are 900
million
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 people who speak Mandarin and consider it as a
first
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language
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.
In contrast
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, there are only 190
million
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 speakers who speak as an additional
language
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. What is remarkable about English speakers is that the
number
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 of speakers as an additional
language
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 is greater than the
number
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 native ones which account for 603
million
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 and 339
million
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 respectively. It is demonstrated that the total
number
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 of Hindi speakers is approximately equal to that of Spanish speakers (490
million
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 and 420
million
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 respectively).
However
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, the
number
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 of speakers who speak these languages and have seen that as a
second
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language
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 is slightly different. The
number
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 of Spanish speakers (70
million
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) is
fewer
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less
 than that of Hindi speakers (120
million
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).
Last
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 but not least, concerning with Arabic and Portuguese, the
number
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 of native speakers of these two languages is similar that with 206
million
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 and 203
million
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 respectively.
Nevertheless
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, the
number
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 of Arabic speakers as an additional
language
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 is almost 2.5 times higher than that of Portuguese speakers. In conclusion, the
most two significant
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two most significant
figure
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figures
 are Mandarin Chinese and English comparing with the total
number
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 among six languages which constitute 1090
million
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 and 942
million
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 respectively.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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