Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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modern capitalistic society, most of the food products sold in an area

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from far off places. It is believed by some people that eating crops, produced only locally would result in a healthier

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enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

and economy.

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essay agrees with

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point of view.

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with, food purchased from the local farmers would result in a decrease in the transportation costs.

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would help in reducing the selling price of the crops as the intermediate travel costs are diminished. A decrease in the price

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, result in a higher purchasing power for the consumers and

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, it would boost the economy significantly.

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, mangoes from Maharashtra cost 10 times more in Himachal Pradesh than those produced locally.

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can result in a better

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enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

in the future. Most of the crops grown by the farmers today are not suitable to be grown in all areas. The growth of commercial crops has resulted in an increased pressure on the soil and

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, the nutritional value of both the yield and soil is affected. A shift from commercial to local products from the farmers would help

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enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

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, the harmful pesticides and insecticides would

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in a lesser quantity helping the overall

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enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. To put in a nutshell, eating only the area specific crops would help the economy by diminishing the transportation prices and would

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help in safe

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enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

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by leading to a change in crop cultivation factors for the farmers and lessening the use of dangerous chemicals.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmentally friendly
carbon emissions
long-distance transportation
biodiversity
pesticides
fertilizers
local economy
sustainability
feasible
diverse range
food choices
cultural identity

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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that politicians are more influential than scientists, whilst others believe that scientists have more influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

many students are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force they to learn foreign languages. Do you extent agree or disagree?

You want to learn a language. A teacher who teaches this language lives near the area where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter: - say how you came to know about him/her - explain why you want to learn this language - ask what help he/she can offer

Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.