Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

To carry out any work without being influence of any external source is the
choice
. Living in a modern era gives a perk of having a lot of choices as per believe of some people. Freedom to choose is another perk of these times.
Availability
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The availability
of many choices
where being
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was being
were being
advantageous has many drawbacks. Here we shall be
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
both views before reaching any
point
of mutual acceptance.
Firstly
, when we talk about choices, we have had too many of them as living in advanced times. A
person
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person's
freedom is ensured by his freely made choices without being influenced by the externals, that gives him a sense of responsibility for which he
can not
can not
cannot
blame to anyone else. To make a
point
for
this
we can take an example of a person who start a business of his own
choice
remaining in his mental capacity using his sound knowledge, creativity and mind without being influenced and after
sometime
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some time
have had a loss in that which blow his mind due to the faults he was unable to perceive at the time of starting, but due to the choices he
have had possessed
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possessed
was possessed
is possessed
possesses
was possessing
is possessing
earlier he could.
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blame anyone. These choices give the chance to take up a responsibility at every level and the margin of
choice
correction depends upon the
workup
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work-up
done for it.
Secondly
, when evaluating the
point
of disagreement
for
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of
having many choices, a
point
that ponder is that
will
spend or pass, as with boredom or in a pleasant manner; of time
while
all choices we shall be making goes
into
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in
our
favor
promote over another
favour
and if
that is
not the case will one be able to take up the responsibility and digest the consequences. Many choices increase the probability to make a mistake which being bothersome sometimes be very problematic, which costs a person time and resources to reach a correct
choice
. Taking
for example
a student in
exam
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an exam
the exam
where the multiple-
choice
questions
been given
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were given
have been given
have been giving
are being given
, that according to many researches is the best evaluative type of question to judge the capability of the examinee due to the reason of producing the confusion to choose the correct answer and exactly works the same phenomenon of having huge choices.
Finally
, when the choices are unlimited, the exam is big and when choices are influenced, exam is really tricky. The solution is that choices should be made wisely as it may be a key to success or the beginning of a new problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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