In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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food
companies due to, many people are facing health
related problems due to excessive consumption of fast food
.I agree with this
idea because money is the only factor can influence any situation.After implementing huge excise on this
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