Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.

With the technological advancement and their rapid and wide applications have significant impact on human
being
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being's
life.
However
, people using Technology because, it saves their time and it does work very perfectly. But, some people use technology for wrong work. Nowadays, people are using
security
camera
and tracking cell phone; is it beneficial or not? Every coin has two sides, positive or negative.
Similarly
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am going to examine both the advantages or disadvantages and shape of my opinion by the end. On the brighter side, every criminal
have
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has
their own mobile phone and they use
moblile
migratory
mobile
phone to contact with their leaders or other group members. So, the tracking
device
help defence people to catch them group and with the help of tracking system, defence people find the criminal location and easily catch criminals.
Moreover
,
major use
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the major use
of
camera
is
security
and
camera
also
used in the school or colleges to show the student or teacher behaviour.
Furthermore
, in city area government puts
camera
on roads for control the traffic system.
In Addition
to
this
,
camera
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the camera
also help
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also helps
to monitoring tourist and historical places. On the darker side, because of
camera
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the camera
and tracking
device
, sometimes people feel insecure and disable. Because, some people easily hack any
security
device
and collect some important memory. Probing ahead, sometime terrorists hacking
camera
and collect some details. Because of that tracing
device
and
camera
,
people
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person's
peoples'
privacy
are hurting
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is hurting
. Majority people think that with the help of
camera
they catch
theft but
Accept comma addition
theft, but
, they knew about the
camera
and wear a mask on their face after they do
robbery
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the robbery
a robbery
. According to me, due to
security
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the security camera
security cameras
camera
and tracing cell Technology, people
does
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do
their work in discipline and they always
rememberable
their rules and regulations but,
for
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to
doing missuse people put
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put misses people
doing misses people put
has misses people put
doing messes people put
is misses people putting
doing miss people put
have misses people put
themselves into horrible situations.
Finally
,
advantages
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the advantages
of
this
development outweigh disadvantages.
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