Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Youngsters find shopping appealing in many

nations these

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nations, these

days as it is their favourite choice of leisure activity. The reasons for

this

behaviour can be due to affordability and aesthetic value.

However

, the benefit of

this

development would be discussed in

this

essay. One of the main reasons why young people spend their free time in the shop is its affordability. In the past, people could afford luxury trips to foreign countries in their free time unlike now. The most

affordable fascinating

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affordable, fascinating

experience is shopping. Another reason why some adolescents find pleasure in shopping could be because of its materials aesthetic value. They usually derive pleasure and satisfaction in acquiring beautiful things

such

as gadgets and costumes. By owning a newly designed material, they often have

sense

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a sense

of joy.

For example

, a recent poll conducted in India found that around 70% of the youth enjoy operating electronic gadgets and devices as compared to reading.

However

,

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,

as a result

of these factors above,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that shopping is beneficial to the nation because of

increased employment rate

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the increased employment rate

in the economy. If more individuals patronize retailers and spend money on their products, the investors would be encouraged to establish more businesses.

Therefore

, people would be vastly employed

For instance

,

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Ali newspaper in 2018 reported a 13% increase in employment in the shopping malls

at

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in

Dubai;

this

is due to the growing shopping rate. In conclusion,

although

while

products

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products'

product

affordability and its attractiveness entices young adults to spend much of their leisure

activities shopping

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activities, shopping

, I think

this

development is beneficial to the

economy not

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economy, not

only because it offers employment opportunities for young people, but it

also

helps to boost the economy.