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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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Recently, Global warming is a major problem that the world is facing.
This
 essay will give the explain about the causes of global warming and the measures that has to be taken from government and an individual. Global warming is increasing day by day, as the amount of carbon dioxide released
in
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into
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
 is
raising
advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status
rising
, due to various reasons. Some of the common reasons are burning of fossil fuels, deforestation, gasoline used by vehicles for transportation. Deforestation has a major impact on global warming as it releases
vast amount
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vast amounts
a vast amount
 of co2, as the government is planning to develop the country by constructing roads and bridges, it requires
destruction
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the destruction
 of trees in
forest
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the forest
 which leads to deforestation,
also
 consumption of petroleum products by vehicles is a major problem which increases as there is a
raise
a growth in strength or number or importance
rise
 in population. As people are more fond of cars each one has
a
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an
 impact on global warming.
Nevertheless
, It can be controlled by taking
precautionart
taken in advance to protect against possible danger or failure
precautionary
 measures by government by avoiding the burning of fossil fuels, banning the usage of plastic as it results in more co2 and restricting the number of vehicles per house, by ensuring there is an actual need of
vehicle
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a vehicle
 or not. As an
induvidual
a human being
individual
 it's our duty to contribute
for
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to
 prevention of using products which reduces the amount of co2 liberation to
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
 and
also
 to ensure that
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 vehicle is properly maintained and emission of gas from their vehicle should be less than the threshold value. As a conclusion, It's the responsibility of each citizen and
also
 the governing
bodis
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body
bodies
boards
borders
 to prevent global warming by making the limited use of products that affecting the environment to make a world better place for living in
future
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the future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global issue
  • severity
  • urgency
  • greenhouse effect
  • human-induced
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • industrial pollution
  • environmental regulations
  • emission standards
  • renewable energy sources
  • green technologies
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • energy consumption
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • eco-friendly
  • extreme weather conditions
  • biodiversity
  • economic stability
  • collective responsibility
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