Individual can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is
proliferation
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a proliferation
in
environment
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environmental
degradation due to human involvements. Owing to
this
ideology, some people think that one
person
can do nothing. So, it is the responsibility of the governments and large institutes to save it. According to
this
view point I
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viewpoint, I
viewpoint I
am totally disagree
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totally disagree
am totally disagreeing
have totally disagreed
and
this
essay will describe my own perspective toward
this
ideology No doubt, flora and fauna are damaging day by day and consumption of natural resources are
also
increasing due to which our
environment
is exploiting. To improve it is not only the burden of higher authorities as everybody knows a single step can change a lot.
For instance
, B.N Sharma from
uttarpradesh
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Uttarpradesh
planted 400 trees in his home city and that was a mass contribution toward
environment
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the environment
. So, nothing can impossible if a
person
has determination and enthusiasm to protect
environment
. In
this
planet all human beings live together and
this
is the only hone for everybody. So, the burden to save it
also
comes in everybody’s shoulders. Moving on, the governments
also
doing various efforts to conserve flora and fauna. As they
also
make policies
such
as SWACH BHARAT ABHIYAN, under which everybody should protect the
environment
. But, it depends on
person
that how many people do not violate
this
law. So, it totally depends on
person intentions
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a person's intentions
person's intentions
. Big companies
also
donate
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
in various campaigns, which is organised by governments,
again it
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again, it
depends upon how many candidates apply for
such
type of campaigns. At
last
governments and companies only give path to protect the
environment
and to follow it depends upon individuals. To encapsulate,
although
governments and institutes have responsibilities to protect
environment
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the environment
. But, they are not only living in
this
planet every human being has
duty
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a duty
to save it because
this
is our home
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • green technologies
  • lifestyle changes
  • reducing waste
  • recycling
  • conserving energy
  • grassroots movements
  • community organizations
  • awareness campaigns
  • public pressure
  • environmentally friendly policies
  • sustainability initiatives
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