Some people believe that in the near future there will be no borders between countries, while others feel that national borders will always remain. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

With the globalisation, people in our modern society more and more travel abroad and it became much easier than ever before thanks to inexpensive
airlines
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airline
companies.
However
,
although
some think that
borders
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the borders
would be cleared in the future, I strongly believe that frontiers will be kept. On the one hand, supporters of
borderless world
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a borderless world
argue that where people are born is
lottery
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a lottery
and there is no choice for them
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
to be born, which is unfair especially for people in unsafe and poor countries. They claim that moving to a safer country for a better life is their basic and human right.
For example
, there are still many people in the world who
are still suffering
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is still suffering
from famine and forced to live in
dangerous condition
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dangerous conditions
a dangerous condition
,
such
as conflicts or in battle fields.
Moreover
, it is
also
argued that removing borders might bring better relationships between countries, which have grudges each other. They think that if we could emigrate to foreign countries more often and more easily, both citizens would be able to have better cultural understandings towards the people from their foreign counterparts, which might strengthen the friendship between nations.
On the other hand
,
depsite
regardless of, in defiance of
despite
the all benefits
to
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of
removing the frontiers between nations, I side with those who feel that borders will be remained the way they are in the future.
Firstly
, borders are to prevent demographic explosion. If many people from less affluent countries come to richer countries, those richer countries would have a population
explosure
a violent release of energy caused by a chemical or nuclear reaction
explosion
, which can give rise to a global demographic unbalance.
Thus
, in my view, borders should be kept to control the population
for
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of
each
countries
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country
.
In addition
, another reason that frontiers should be remained is a political reason. The national
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
is an illustration of
this
. There are million of migrants who try to move into a country for
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
wills and acts like terrorism or weapon tradings every year. Most of them are blocked in the border controls to keep the country
peaceful
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peacefully
.
Finally
, my strongest argue is that international crimes along the borders. In fact, trafficking of slaves, drugs, adolescent prostitutions and organs are still often practised around the borders, which should be eliminated promptly. Borders, in my opinion, aim to keep tabs on those illegal
terading
buying or selling securities or commodities
trading
activities to protect their own countries and the citizens. In short,
although
some believe that borders should be cleared to respect the human rights and to provide a chance to have better relationships between nations, frontiers
bring
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brings
a lot
ot
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OT
of
negative outcomes
to
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in
richer countries.
Therefore
, on balance, I wholeheartedly believe that borders must be always kept.
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