Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read any entertaiment books because they think it is wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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the only place where, we keep our ego aside and completely submit our self to the vision of the writer. So some parents argue that kids should not

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read, entertaining

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habit of reading only educational novels. In my

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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

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a way to lead a

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purpose of your

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. To embark upon, Reading books really helps children from an early age to become strong from within and it does give

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confidence

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fullest. Reading

educations

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education

articls

nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication

articles

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does gives a clear picture how to be a decent and

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a branch of knowledge

discipline

life

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, at the same time it gives

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an immense confidence

immense confidence

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read any entertaiment books because they think it is wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages business to move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.