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Nowadays people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons, is this negative or positive development

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Most people from different age group are glued to their computer or cell phone these days.
This
 is not a positive development because when
any one
any person
anyone
 spends their entire day
on
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in
 front of
computer screen
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the computer screen
a computer screen
 or phone screen it
will leads
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will lead
 to health problems. They may even develop
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 issues. From my perspective, it is beneficial for everyone to explore themselves towards outdoor activities like sports and
many
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much
 more. As far as I think outdoor activities are good for everyone. They make them fitter and stronger as
individual
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an individual
individuals
. By playing outdoor games it
increase
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increases
 the stamina of the body. A survey was done by Health times showing a report that
person
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a person
people
 involved in sports
have
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has
 healthier life and live
long
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longer
 than those people who stay in their
home
.
Thus one
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Thus, one
 should get involved in outdoor activities in their life.
In contrast
 to
this
, spending more
time
in
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at
home
 and watching TV leads to several health problems like obesity and diabetes due to lack of physical movements.
Furthermore
,
such
 people face difficulties in
interaction
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interacting
 in social life.
This
 is because; people do not communicate with their friends, relatives or
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
 which give
raise
move upward
rise
 to lack of confidence to interacting with others. As evidence,
repost
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a report
report
the report
 was presented by Public speaker
Authority claiming
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Authority, claiming
 that interpersonal skills in people are cultivated only by spending
time
 outside from
home
 and having words with others.
Thus staying
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Thus, staying
in
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at
home
 has adverse effect on our health and personality. In conclusion, it is crystal clear that spending
time
outdoor
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outdoors
 and getting involved in outdoor actives makes our body fit and
healthier
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healthy
 and on the other side spending more
time
in
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at
home
have
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has
negative effect
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a negative effect
 on our personality.
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