Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Now a days regional languages are
least preferrable
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less preferable
least preferable
when compared to learning
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
at school.If
this
continues, there are high chances of wiping out the regional languages. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
this
point and will explain you how to manage using both the languages
simuntaneously
at the same instant
simultaneously
in
this
essay.
Firstly
, these days
schools are mostly preferring
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schools, mostly prefers
schools mostly prefers
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
upon the local languages. I can understand
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is the most important
language
and helps you to go across the
globe but
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globe, but
still neglecting the regional languages will create a bad impact on the society.
For example
, if the person is only excelled in one
language leaving
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language, leaving
behind the other languages, the chances of survival around the world
is
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are
too low.
Atleast
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At least
you need to learn more than three languages to sustain in
this
modern era.
Secondly
, not concentrating on the local languages will
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the student basement. Because without teaching the importance of local
language
how the
chlidren
a young person of either sex
children
know their culture, its
imporatnce
the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
imports
and enrich our society. To conclude
this
essay, I suggest
school
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a school
should be
concentrate
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concentrating
on local
language
as well as
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
which helps the children to increase their fluency and understand the importance of their culture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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