Both poor and rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Entry into
university
irrespective of socioeconomic status has always been a controversial topic,
besides
controversies the alarming question is that whether tertiary education is even accessible to all the students or not? I agree with the statement and believe that it has become extremely hard for the students to even enter
university
owing to the disproportion in the
student
number and seat availability, compounded with increased percentage of scholars and fee structure.
To begin
with, in recent decades the secondary school graduated
student
numbers has tremendously increased, resulting in asymmetry between the eligible students and available seats.
This
difference creates burden on the
university
management, compelling them to raise the standards of eligibility.
For instance
, in 2018, India, 1 million students graduated from schools, whereas the seats available is only around 0.1 million, statistically making a
student
entry hard to a
university
.
Furthermore
, despite making academic standards high, the management
also
demanded huge amounts as compensation to allocate particular seats.
Hence
, making it unapproachable for the students of both high and low socioeconomic groups.
For example
, according to a recent article in TIMES newspaper, it is mentioned that,
university
fee has sky rocketed meaning it costs a life for the
student
’s parents to afford a
university
seat globally, either it could be a developed country or a developing country. To conclude,
finally
having studied so hard for years with good grades, still the students are unable to be sure of entering a top
university
, irrespective of their
economical
Suggestion
economic
status to fulfil their dream.
Thus
, strengthening my argument that financial status does not play a key role in obtaining a
student
access to
university
.
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