Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent, while others think that people have become independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the 21st
century few people
believe that the Suggestion
century, few people
dependency
rate
is higher to each other. Other think that nowadays people have become more independent. This
essay discuses firstly
discusses with the people believe on dependent and secondly it
discusses with the scenario of independent people Accept comma addition
secondly, it
on
the world. In my Suggestion
in
opinion
the independent rate
is slightly increased in the modern era.
On the one hand, some people think that most of the people are dependent on their husband or male members of the families. It means in the context of our nation very few people get job
and they have Suggestion
jobs
responsibility
to Suggestion
a responsibility
the responsibility
feed their all
family members. Suggestion
feed all their
Moreover
, they should care their children
education and other necessary materials. If the main person of the family died or Suggestion
children's
child's
accident
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accident, then
then
his family fail
in great trauma. Suggestion
fails
For example
the data of the ministry of employment of Nepal shows
that nearly about 70% family Suggestion
show
member's
people, only one members have Suggestion
members'
job
and all members dependent on him as well as if the jobholder person died Suggestion
jobs
then
family fall on worse situation. However
, I disagree with this
opinion
because other family members also
doing job
and getting opportunities
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a job
the job
On the other hand
, people argue that the rate
of independent is slightly increased. The rate
of independence rate
is slightly increased as well as the rate
of dependency
decrees because a lot of industries have been open and people get job
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jobs
on
the factory or industry. Suggestion
at
This
is to say that people are not only dependent on the male member's
family members. They Suggestion
members'
have
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have also been doing
have also done
are also doing
were also doing
were also done
also
doing works
on the industries. For illustration a research carried out by Tribhuban University Shows that in our nation that the factory or industry highly established and people get on Suggestion
work
job
Suggestion
a job
on
the factory and Suggestion
at
in
dependency
rate
is decreased did with this
opinion
because I do not find any jobless people in my village.
In conclusion, some people believe that the dependency
rate
is gradually goes
off families are dependent with major person of the family. Other people Suggestion
going
thinks
that the Suggestion
think
rate
of dependency
is slightly decreased in my opinion
the rate
of dependency
is gradually goes
up.Suggestion
going
Submitted by In the 21st century, few people believe that the dependency rate is higher for each other. Other think that nowadays people have become more independent. This essay discusses firstly discusses with the people believe independent and secondly, it discusses with the scenario of independent people on the world. In my opinion, the independent rate is slightly increased in the modern era. On the one hand, some people think that most of the people are dependent on their husband or male members of the families. It means in the context of our nation very few people get a job and they have the responsibility to feed there all family members. Moreover, they should care about their children education and other necessary materials. If the main person of the family died or accident then his family fail in great trauma. For example, the data of the ministry of employment of Nepal shows that nearly about 70% family member's people, only one member have a job and all members dependent on him as well as if the jobholder person died then family falls on the worse situation. However, I disagree with this opinion because other family members also doing a job and getting opportunities On the other hand, people argue that the rate of independent is slightly increased. The rate of independence rate is slightly increased as well as the rate of dependency decrees because a lot of industries have been open and people get a job in the factory or industry. This is to say that people are not only dependent on the male member's family members. They have also done works on the industries. For illustration research carried out by Tribhuban University Shows that in our nation that the factory or industry highly established and people get on the job on the factory and dependency rate is decreased did with this opinion because I do not find any jobless people in my village. In conclusion, some people believe that the dependency rate gradually goes off families are dependent on the major person of the family. Other people think that the rate of dependency is slightly decreased in my opinion the rate of dependency is gradual goes up. on
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