Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent, while others think that people have become independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the 21st century, few people believe that the
dependency
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rate
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is higher for each other. Other think that nowadays people have become more independent.
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discusses with the people believe independent and
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, it discusses with the scenario of independent people
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in
the world. In my
opinion
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, the independent
rate
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is slightly increased in the modern era. On the one hand, some people think that most of the people are dependent on their husband or male members of the families. It means in the context of our nation very few people get a
job
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and they have the responsibility to feed
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they're
all family members.
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, they should care about their
children
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children's
child's
education and other necessary materials. If the main person of the family died or
accident
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accident, then
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his family
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fails
in great trauma.
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, the data of the ministry of employment of Nepal
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show
that nearly about 70% family
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members'
people, only one member have a
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and all members dependent on him as well as if the jobholder person died
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family falls on the worse situation.
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, I disagree with
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opinion
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because other family members
also
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doing a
job
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and getting opportunities
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, people argue that the
rate
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of independent is slightly increased. The
rate
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of independence
rate
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is slightly increased as well as the
rate
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of
dependency
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decrees because a lot of industries have been open and people get a
job
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in the factory or industry.
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is to say that people are not only dependent on the male
member's
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members'
family members. They have
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done
works
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work
on the industries. For illustration research carried out by Tribhuban University Shows that in our nation that the factory or industry highly established and people get on the
job
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on
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at
in
the factory and
dependency
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rate
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is decreased did with
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opinion
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because I do not find any jobless people in my village. In conclusion, some people believe that the
dependency
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rate
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gradually goes off families are dependent on the major person of the family. Other people think that the
rate
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of
dependency
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is slightly decreased in my
opinion
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the
rate
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of
dependency
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is
gradual
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gradually
goes
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going
up.
Submitted by In the 21st century, few people believe that the dependency rate is higher for each other. Other think that nowadays people have become more independent. This essay discusses firstly discusses with the people believe independent and secondly, it discusses with the scenario of independent people on the world. In my opinion, the independent rate is slightly increased in the modern era. On the one hand, some people think that most of the people are dependent on their husband or male members of the families. It means in the context of our nation very few people get a job and they have the responsibility to feed there all family members. Moreover, they should care about their children education and other necessary materials. If the main person of the family died or accident then his family fail in great trauma. For example, the data of the ministry of employment of Nepal shows that nearly about 70% family member's people, only one member have a job and all members dependent on him as well as if the jobholder person died then family falls on the worse situation. However, I disagree with this opinion because other family members also doing a job and getting opportunities On the other hand, people argue that the rate of independent is slightly increased. The rate of independence rate is slightly increased as well as the rate of dependency decrees because a lot of industries have been open and people get a job in the factory or industry. This is to say that people are not only dependent on the male member's family members. They have also done works on the industries. For illustration research carried out by Tribhuban University Shows that in our nation that the factory or industry highly established and people get on the job on the factory and dependency rate is decreased did with this opinion because I do not find any jobless people in my village. In conclusion, some people believe that the dependency rate gradually goes off families are dependent on the major person of the family. Other people think that the rate of dependency is slightly decreased in my opinion the rate of dependency is gradual goes up. on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interdependence
  • globalization
  • technological advancements
  • collective action
  • digital evolution
  • minimal reliance
  • direct interaction
  • empowered
  • access to technology
  • societal expectations
  • personal choice
  • leverage
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