In this modern world some people scare for something which is unknown to them also, so what do you think this scare is and what are the consequences of this?

FEAR, the synonym of SCARE, is the sole word which shakes the entire livelihood of a human being. As
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is a negative feeling, out of the entire emotions an individual has, it, not only weakens the human brain increasingly but
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damages the appetite
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
the immune system with multiple health issues. It is raised out of certain experience towards the incident or object or specific cause that happens to any person but not by birth. A person immersed deeply under
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inhibitions shall not mingle with anyone so easily, but would rather like to spend much time on thinking about the same thing again and again. Fear is comprised of several stages in an inclining order when it starts and declining, obviously when it ends. It is common with everyone to get scared
for
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of
something or the other, some will get
fever
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a fever
, some will have other health
problems loss
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problems, loss
of immunity, decrease in red
blodd
the fluid (red in vertebrates) that is pumped through the body by the heart and contains plasma, blood cells, and platelets
blood
corposules
a small container
capsules
, sleeplessness, indigestion, and so on. Once
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feel starts, it separates a person from his or her
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to a wide extent, ultimately leaves them in loneliness and depression, at times. Many people are psychologically disturbed when
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feel continues and becomes stronger, day-by-day, weakening their minds. Many a times, it leads to unreasonable frustration, unknowingly impacts the family
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and even personal
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.
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, a kid of 5
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months, cries
out of fear upon listening to sudden or high volume sounds, which might be due to lack of knowledge of the happening or may be the incapability of expressing. Some people become panic in the darkness, some in the
day light
the time after sunrise and before sunset while it is light outside
daylight
, whereas the other few are
dread
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dreaded
with staying alone. Irrespective of the reason and cause, it is clear that FEARFULNESS KILLS as it is a disease and not an ability. Whilst,
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problems
persist
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persists
, it is good to use soft methods rather than medicines and tonics, to get rid of
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scenarios. Prescriptions are given only for a self satisfaction for psychological emotions, so as to make the patient relieve out of the scene temporarily and physically. Medications like Yoga, meditation, Breathe related exercises, etc., bring the sufferer to normal situation very sternly and in the positive
pace
any distinct time period in a sequence of events
phase
place
. Though the procedure is slow to work out, it stands for
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a high time
the high time
, as long as the practice continues.
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, it is very important to be confident upon whatever they are doing; mainly they should have an inner feeling that they shall come out of
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mess and shall lead a joyous and healthy
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. Unless there is a self-realization, no one can help to be perfectly back from the consequences, thereto. I opine, nothing is impossible except we start thinking, I'm possible, as said by Swamy Vivekananda. Precisely, it is always better to be strong and confident, until something wrong shall not happen by self, unknowingly or unwillingly to harm others.

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