Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every single thing we do,
effects
have an effect upon
affects
our
environment
in a positive as well as
negative way
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negative ways
a negative way
. Some people do not take responsibility to improve the
environment
and they believe only the
government
and big companies can make efforts to save the natural world.
This
essay will argue why it is entirely necessary for each individual to make a contribution to the better
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
. Heaps of people think that the
government
should take measures for the betterment of the
environment
because there is nothing much in their hands to do. Ozone depletion, global warming, excessive pollution all effect
environment
adversely. There is nothing much in
general population’s hands
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the general population’s hands
to cope up with these big concerns. People
also
believe that big corporate companies or factories have a major role in it because the major portion of pollution is produced by them and if they solve these issues by proper disposition, the
environment
can be saved.
For instance
, the United States of America
has enforced
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have enforced
a law for appropriate disposition of environmental wastage and set a limit for companies who produce air pollutants. Despite the fact that
government
and big business companies should pay attention in order to protect
environment
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the environment
, it is every person’s responsibility to keep
environment
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the environment
safe and clean. There
are
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is
almost uncountable population
on
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of
the earth, and if every person tries his best to maintain good
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
, the
environment
will change drastically.
For
example we
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example, we
can help by volunteer on earth day event, avoid plastic bags, and host a recycling and cleaning events.
Hence it’s
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Hence, it’s
an individual responsibility to improve and
environment
. To conclude,
this
essay argued why every single person
need
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needs
to help
in
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with
maintenance of good
environment
and not just the
government
and large companies. I entirely disagree with the thought of leaving everything on the
government
and
corporate
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corporations
corporation
.
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