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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#animals #place #st #century #waste #resources
It is argued that
wildlife
 creatures plays nothing in our modern life so that the effortless of
conservating
fruit preserved by cooking with sugar
conserving
 them make a huge
wasting
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waste
 of human resources. While I accept that suit many people, I believe that those kind of animals is always playing a vital part for our
plannet
(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction
planet
. On the one hand, it
can not
can not
cannot
 be denied the important role of
wildlife
 animals in our life.
Wildlife
 organisms have been contributing to the sustainable development of the natural ecology. It is not only
an
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a
 vital part of the food chain, contributing to remain the balance of natural processes; but
also
 providing the valuable genes for science research.
Furthermore
, those beautiful creatures
is
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are
 the main factors of biodiversity.
Consevating
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Consulting
wildlife
 animals in an
affective
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
 way can give our
herritage
practices that are handed down from the past by tradition
heritage
 a good chance to see how greatest our
plannet
(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction
planet
 are, as always.
On the other hand
, it is no doubt that
conservating
wildlife
 animals costs a lot of resources.
Firstly
, a great deal of money is required to carry out any project to protect
wildlife
 animals, in which the infrastructure and research are the two most expensive. The more difficult to attach animal tracking devices is, the more it costs.
Secondly
, the protecting
proccesses
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
processes
process
 have been started from a few organizations, so the budget for
this
activities
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activity
 is always expensive. That will be easier if every person gave a hand in
this
proccess
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
process
processes
, trying to raise human awareness
surrouding
closely encircling
surrounding
 us about
conservating
fruit preserved by cooking with sugar
conserving
 not only
wildlife
 animals, but
also
 biological resources in overall,
this
 fighting would be more
affective
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
 and cost less resources than ever. In conclusion, it is certainly true that animal fighting protection costs a great amount of resources, but
this
 is by no mean that those effortless is meaningless because
wildlife
 animals always play an important role in human life, now and forever.
Submitted by Thanh on

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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