Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, town halls and sporting facilities is more important than renovation if the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals would agree that building new

musuems

a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

museums

, town hall, and other sporting facilities would be better tan renovating and maintaining old buildings.

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, there are some people who contend with

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idea.

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essay will tackle both of these views and give my opinion. One one hand, there are several people who

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past tense of "will"

would

agree to construct new public buildings than renovate the old ones.

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is mainly because constructing new buildings are much easier, cheaper, and safer. Old buildings

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as, museums are tedious, sensitive, and difficult to maintain. It needs close monitoring to check if the building is still

safe for public to

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safe for public

visit. An example of

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, was when the Notre Dame church caught fire. According to the news, old churches are prone to

fire especially

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fire, especially

that it is mostly made out of

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wooden

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, the

worth

everything that exists anywhere

world

of renovating the Notre Dame church would cost millions,

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why, a lot of people would agree that it is more practical and safer to

contruct

make by combining materials and parts

construct

new building

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a new building

with modern style.

On the other hand

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, some people argued that renovating and maintaining old buildings and sport facilities

is considered

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are considered

utmost important. These buildings have seen and withstand thousand of years, and it is vital to maintain them. Old museums are part of cultural heritage. It gives people a glimpsed of what was in the past.

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, these buildings are tourist

attrations

the force by which one object attracts another

attractions

and causes massive income to one's country. In

coonclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conclusions

consolation

, it is important for me that old relics should be kept and well maintained, these buildings are part of our history and they deserved to be well maintained

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even it is costly.