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with the development of technology and science, some people believe that there is no great value of artist such as musicians and painters. what are the things artist can do but the scientist cannot, should art be encouraged more.

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With the technological and scientific advancements in recent years make one
life
 more effortless and uncomplicated by various ways. It is often argued that, artists like musicians and painters have no
significant
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significance
signs
 in our
life
. From my perspective, arts still
wins
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win
 the credit
of
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by
 filling us with insights and values that science has failed to. For
this
 reason, it should be encouraged. Though it is true that, scientist with their innovations made our
life
 effortless by introducing equipment.
On
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In
With
By
 contrast, artists filled our
life
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lives
 with feeling, emotions, inspiration and much more
by
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of
 their arts like music and painting.
Furthermore
, machines fail to relax our
mind but
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mind, but
 by listening music it
boost
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boosts
 and regenerate our mind. As evidence a survey was done by Times Art Gallery showing a report that more than average people use art as a process of piece mind. Since the arts
brings
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bring
 a lot of benefits to us so I argue that it must and should be
encourages
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encouraging
 to some extents. Enjoying
arts
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the arts
promotes
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promote
 the habit of self-
refection
a calm, lengthy, intent consideration
reflection
. If you walk into the art gallery, attend to a concert or even just stay to read, you almost certainly began to think about your inner value and for me,
this
 is an invaluable lesson in
life
 because if we begin to reflect about ourselves, we begin not to just become more human but
also
 consider the lies of other too. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that science and technology have great value in our
life
, but in term of arts it
can teaches
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can teach
 us many aspects of
life
 that the former cannot.
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