Some people think that testing on animals is necessary for discovering medicine that helps fight diseases, while others believe it is not necessary to test on animals for this reason. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are
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of them because of their benefits to humanity. Every year, millions of animals feel painful suffering and death because of scientific research for drugs and cosmetic products. Thousands of people are saved from painful diseases and death because of the powerful medical drugs and treatments.
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incredible gift of medicine would not be possible without animal testing. Scientists practice new techniques
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as organ transplant on animals. If they don’t test on animals, many products or drugs will be extremely unsafe.
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way and may help to find more cure in the future.
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, there would not be any more death as well as fear of the diseases like Cancer and AIDS.
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, animal experiments are unkind
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and it causes animals a lot of pain. Many tests are not really important
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as cosmetics, shampoos, soaps and other cleaning products.
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, sometime an experiment on animal gives us the wrong result because animals are not exactly the same as
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to be tested on animals, especially with the huge database of knowledge and modern computer models. To sum up, there is no better way of alternative on animal experiment. Human beings are always more important than animals.
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, we must make sure that millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with minimum suffering.
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, testing should be avoided for cosmetic products.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Medical breakthroughs
  • In vitro (test tube) experiments
  • Alternatives to animal testing
  • Clinical trials
  • Vivisection
  • Biomedical research
  • Animal welfare/rights
  • Cross-species extrapolation
  • Compassionate use
  • Cruelty-free practices
  • Suffering alleviation
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Human-animal physiological differences
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