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The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Mother
 and
father
 are the two supporting pillars for growth of the
child
.In my opinion,
both
 should have the duty of raising the
child
 equally divide between them.
Although
 the
mother
 has to carry the
child
 in her womb for 9 months
this
 doesn't mean that she can shake her obligation to raise the
child
.So the duties should be equally divided between the two. Generally
child
Suggestion
a child
the child
 is mostly raised by
mother
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a mother
 in
majority
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the majority
 of cases due lack of
involvment
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
 from the
father
.Since only the
mother
 generally gets her
preganency
the state of being pregnant; the period from conception to birth when a woman carries a developing fetus in her uterus
pregnancy
 leave and the
father
 has to work these
situation
Suggestion
situations
 leads to
neglectment
 from paternal side.
Also
some thing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
 can be
though
not given to gentleness or sentimentality
tough
 to the kid by only either of the parent.Some people agree that
handling
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the handling
 and use of
mechinical
using (or as if using) mechanisms or tools or devices
mechanical
 tools can only be taught by the
father
.Whereas cooking skills and basic stuff which require attention to
detial
an isolated fact that is considered separately from the whole
detail
 is taught by
mother
. If a
child
 is neglected by either of
these side
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these sides
, it can lead to
phscyological
of or relating to the biological study of physiology
physiological
 problems later down the line.A
child
 raised by
both
 parents is generally emotionally attached to
both
 parents.In previous times generally the
father
 was the sole earner and
mother
 was only the housewife which lead to the
child
 being emotionally attached to only
mother
. If a
child
 is raised by
both
 the
mother
 and
father
, he or she is raised properly.Without the
child
 worrying for acceptance from the parents.
Submitted by Soham on

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