Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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An increasing number of people are using mobile phones and computers nowadays. It is argued that
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social phenomenon leads to the losing the ability to communicate directly
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with
users. I partly agree with
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idea depending on how people use these technological devices in their life. On the one hand, when people access to the internet with smart phones or computers, they lose their face-to-face
communication
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because of some main reasons.
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, people tend to spend too much time playing games, watching movies, reading a bunch of articles appeared in their feeds...
without
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Without
talking with their family or friends.
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, they rarely talk to other people and
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gradually lose the ability to make a
converstion
the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.
conversation
conversion
directly.
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, the availability of new communicating technologies can
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have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction.
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, many youngsters choose to make friends online rather than hang out with their fellows in the real world, and these virtual relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships.
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,
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interactive
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cell phones and computers through application like video chat on social networks are almost as good as face-to-face meetings now. It allows people in different countries to interact without meeting each other and helps them keep in touch wherever they are.
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, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or country.
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, now people can search for many interesting programs on the internet that teach them how to communicate well in real life.
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, people
feel
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
easily to assess a world of knowledge and experience in
communication
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activities. In conclusion, computers and cell phones may lead to losing
communication
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skills when they have face-to-face meetings.
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, these high-tech equipments
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help to improve
communication
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skills depend on how people use it in their daily life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • interpersonal skills
  • overreliance
  • digital communication platforms
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • social bonds
  • enhance
  • bridging long distances
  • fostering connections
  • age groups
  • adept
  • integrating
  • landscape
  • emotional intelligence
  • nuances
  • striking a balance
  • limitations
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