Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Invention of motorways has significantly helped in reducing
amount
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the amount
of time required for covering long distances. But, like every other human invention, motorways have caused a lot of problems.
This
essay will discuss the problems that arise due to motorways and the possible solutions. Bad
road
conditions and lack of
survillance
close observation of a person or group (usually by the police)
surveillance
systems are the major issues associated with motorways. Since motorways are normally constructed for longer distances,
hence
, cracks might occur
in
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on
the
road
due to weather conditions, which go unnoticed for long periods of time and
this
might result in severe accidents.
For example
, it took authorities almost 2 months to identify cracks on Delhi Meerut highway.
Also
, a lot of the highways are not patrolled by police cars on regular periods.
This
can result in an injured traveller not being catered to on time, which might result in injuries becoming fatal. The possible solution for
bad
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the bad road condition
road
condition is regular checks of the motorway by government authorities, and cancellation of operator license in case cracks
are found
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is founded
.
This
would incentivize the operators to maintain high quality roads.
Also
, automatic surveillance systems
such
as cameras,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
should be installed on the motorways at regular distances, so that, in case of any emergency, the cameras are able to notify the authorities and timely help can be made available to the travellers. To conclude, lack of proper
road
condition and
survillance
associated with civil life or performed by persons who are not active members of the military
civilians
are the major issues associated with motorways and the same can be resolved by conducting regular safety checks of the motorways and installing surveillance systems at regular distances on the motorway.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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