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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As the world population is rising, meeting the dietary needs of all people has become a matter of concern. Some people argue that growing more genetically modified
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 can tackle
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 issue. In my opinion, GM foods can solve
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 issue to a great extent but there are some other solutions as well for
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 problem. Genetic engineering can be used for increasing the
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 production. By changing the DNA structure, people can make crops more disease and pest resistant. When crops are not destroyed by diseases and pest, the yield will be more.
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, more desirable features can be added to crops by genetic engineering.
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, by using genetic modification we can grow bigger fruits or vegetables. Nutritional value of crops could
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 be increased by genetically modifying the crops.
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, GM crops have some drawbacks and depending more on them is not the right solution to
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 problem. When crops are manipulated to increase yield, certain natural nutritional contents may be lost and
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, people may get allergies by consuming these kinds of foods. Because of these reasons it is unwise to depend too much on them. A better solution is to encourage all people to grow their
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. If each family can grow enough
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 for themselves,
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 scarcity will not be a problem at all. If
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 is made a legal obligation, people can eat naturally grown healthy
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 and their nutritional requirements will be met. In conclusion, GM foods can certainly solve the
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 scarcity to a great extent.
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, they are not the only solution.
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 of depending on GM
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 bought from the market, people should try to grow their own
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 in their backyard.
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