Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#governments #money #railways #roads

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Nowadays, As the population is increasing tremendously the need of safe and

fast transpost

Suggestion

the fast transport system

fast transport system

system

Use synonyms

is rising in order to match the requirements of people.

some

Suggestion

Some

people

claims

Suggestion

claim

have claimed

that the money should be

spend

Suggestion

spent

on railways rather than on roadways by the ministry. Personally, I believe that the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

should

alot

give out

allot

alert

their budgets more towards railways.

Further

Linking Words

, In

this

Linking Words

essay we will discuss some reasons.

Firstly

Linking Words

, Rails

are meant

Suggestion

is meant

to be more affordable by

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

than any other travelling ways and

also

Linking Words

people prefers railways because it is more convenient to them for long distance.

Therefore

Linking Words

, People prefer more to

travel

Use synonyms

by rails.

However

Linking Words

, Due to the increase in population there is

also

Linking Words

Suggestion

peak in traffic congestion as every individual prefers to have their own car or bikes for their travelling purpose which leads to an increase in traffic congestion and a another reason for people to

travel

Use synonyms

through rails as the congestion problems are less over there.

Secondly

Linking Words

, As to

travel

Use synonyms

more safely and conveniently people are likely to

travel

Use synonyms

by railways because it is safer than travelling by roadways

Suggestion

chances

Suggestion

chance

of accidents are lesser than any other medium of travelling.

Moreover

Linking Words

, Due to the increasing demand of faster transport

Use synonyms

system

Accept comma addition

system, government

government

Use synonyms

has launched various new rail lines and trains like

mono rails

Suggestion

monorail

monorails

bullet

trains

Suggestion

train

metro

system

Use synonyms

that

Suggestion

That

make

Suggestion

makes

people to reach earlier.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, Railway

system

Use synonyms

are

Suggestion

highly preferred to send those goods from one place to another which are heavier in weight and cost less for their supply.

Lastly

Linking Words

, The

government

Use synonyms

should

alot

give out

allot

budgets for railways as rails are more affordable, convenient and preferable by people and

also

Linking Words

a huge reason that

government

Use synonyms

should focus highly on railways that it causes less pollution to the environment than roadways as there are

high number

Suggestion

a high number

of cars are

running causing

Suggestion

running, causing

high damage to our environment which is likely to be lower by railways.

Hence

Linking Words

, as the population is increasing and they are more dependable on safer and faster

transportation so

Accept comma addition

transportation, so

investing money by

government

Use synonyms

on railways is important and logical. All in all, I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

government

Use synonyms

in developed or undeveloped country should invest for safe and fast transportation for people like railways.

Submitted by jagjit on Thu Jul 18 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

365 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Carbon emissions
Mass transportation
Traffic congestion
Economic growth
Regional development
Initial investment
Feasibility
Flexibility
Rural areas
Integration
Sustainable
Efficiency
Infrastructure
Commuters
Public expenditure
Autonomous vehicles
Long-term investment
Accessibility
Connectivity
Modal shift

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
A lot of children spend time on social media surfing the internet and playing video games which hurts their studies and grades and makes them experience loneliness and health problems such as obesity. What is the reason behind this? What can the parents do to prevent it?
Spending countless hours on the internet brings about various negative consequences to children's lives. Parents play a pivotal role in addressing these issues.
7
band
Parents should be punished for the crimes of their children. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, crimes can be committed by anyone, including children. However, I strongly disagree with those who feel that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes.
5
band
Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it's effect on a child.
The parents are encourage their children to use the leisure time to do a part-time job. Personally, I think it is good for development of the children itself. There are some benefits and drawbacks that children can get from part-time job. I will discuss both sides.
6
band
The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People’s health standards are expected to decline over the coming years. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for this trend and explain why I strongly agree with this statement.
4.5
band
Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others arque that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion. • Write at least 250 words.
Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. On the one hand it is really good point of view, because students will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. But In my opinion the most important for student while they study in university is to concentrate only on the educational process, because you spent a lot of time for your part-time job that's why you can't do your hometask for University.

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

A lot of children spend time on social media surfing the internet and playing video games which hurts their studies and grades and makes them experience loneliness and health problems such as obesity. What is the reason behind this? What can the parents do to prevent it?

Parents should be punished for the crimes of their children. To what extent do you agree?

Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it's effect on a child.

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?