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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time #health
Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
 working people are facing
health
 issues as they don'
t
 get sufficient
time
for
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to
exercise
 during working days.
This
 essay will explain the various possible
reason
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reasons
 behind not doing
exercise
 adequately by working people and will discuss possible solutions. There are various reasons, working people don'
t
 find
time
 to
doing
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do
exercise
 on a daily basis. Working peoples
mostly has
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mostly have
 pressure to complete their tasks. They have to
work
 extended hours in the office. Their works make them mentally tired.
Also
, they have to travel to different places for their business tours, have to visit client locations. Traffic congestion is
also
 another issue that peoples have to spend more
time
 while commuting to office and homes.
Furthermore
,
health
 is
also
 an important aspect of life. If we can'
t
 keep our
health
 properly, we won'
t
 able to
work
 efficiently. We might get ill frequently. Not doing proper
exercise
, might have an adverse effect on
health
,
chances
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the chances
 of getting overweight. To avoid all these issues, people have to make a daily routine and give proper
time
 for
exercise
. People should have to plan the
work
 properly to give proper
time
 for
exercise
. There are certain companies, having Gym and playgrounds into their
premice
land and the buildings on it
premises
. Employees should use these facilities during their free
time
 in the office. Some companies organize sports activities or events, the employees should participate in
such
 activities. In conclusion, People should develop
habit
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habits
 of doing
exercise
 by doing better planning of their
work
. The balance should be maintained between the professional and personal life. The employer should
also
 encourage employees to do
exercise
 and stay fit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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