Around the world, it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. do you think it is a negative or positive development?

The rapid

devolement

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

of computers and internet in the

last

two

decasde

a period of 10 years

decades

decade

have changed

Suggestion

has changed

completely our ability to communicate with others and access data. Due to these changes, it is likely that in the

upcomming

of the relatively near future

upcoming

years more adults will work from

home

and

also

, more children will be

home

schooled. These changes, despite the many advantages, will have a negative effect on our

sociaty

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

and should not be supported. There are many difficulties, both personal and social, in having to work and study outside of our homes. Personally, it requires us to wake up early everyday and spend time driving our cars or the bus until we reach our working place.

Also

, not being present at

home

makes us lees accessible to our daily tasks

such

as cleaning or washing the dishes, things we could have done if we would have stayed at

home

. Socially, not working from

home

increase the amount of cars on the roads and

this

often leads to traffic jams.

Further more

in addition

Furthermore

, studying in a formal education system rather than

home

school requires the constant maintenance of the

establishement

the act of forming or establishing something

establishment

and studying materials,

such

as computers and laboratory equipment. Despite the above mentioned, I believe staying at

home

will have

determinental

(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury

detrimental

effects on our

sociaty

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

. Our culture is based on social connections and interactions and meeting in person other friends or

sdudying

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

together in the same room is far more rewarding than having an online chat. Creating a new idea,

such

as a new

commersial

connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises

commercial

or a script for a movie, requires people to share thoughts together and

this

can be achieved much better in person rather than online. Even more, studying in front of a teacher who is present and can touch and connect to the child will make the lesson much more

fruitfull

productive or conducive to producing in abundance

fruitful

grateful

and unforgetable. In conclusion, despite the massive progression of computers have done, I

stronly

with strength or in a strong manner

strongly

believe that people should not work or study from

home

and interact personally with each other.