It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional culture are incompatible to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Technology

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and Traditional

culture

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are both

diffreant

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

things.

Technology

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is generally useful to

devlop

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

personality not

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personality, not

their

culture

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, but it helps not only to understand others

culture

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but

also

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preserve them.

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Firstly

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Firstly, technology

technology

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connected people from

diffreant

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different cultures

different culture

a different culture

culture

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which

Suggestion

Which

introduce them to interact and learn their values

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thoughts

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routines and more on.

Secondly

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Due to the

incerased

made greater in size or amount or degree

increased

use of

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technology globalization

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technology, globalization

also

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increased its gives lots of

opportunites

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

to human being

such

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as jobs

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business markets in world wide

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However for

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However, for

settel

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settling

settle

in other cities and countries they learn their

culture

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an accept

too but

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too, but

still they follow their own nations

culure

readily apparent to the mind

clear

that is

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the very

good

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best

thing.

For example

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In India People are

gone

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going

verious

of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity

various

countries for jog

purpose but

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purpose, but

thet

pointing out something

that

they

the

follow their

indian

a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

culture

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such

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as Pujas, Diwali female gave

prefrance

a strong liking

preference

preferences

to ware saree and

mens

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Mens

men

ware Kutras and Payjamas.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

327 words

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional culture are incompatible to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Fully explain your ideas

Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is important for all the cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces, such as parks or squares. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the future, more people will chose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holidays. Do you agree or disagree?