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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

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When it comes to
food
, people often have varied opinions. Over the period of time
food
preparation
 techniques have evolved.
This
 essay will discuss about how easy
preparation
 of
food
afects
have an effect upon
affects
affect
effects
 the way people live. A person has only 24 hours in a day, and he has to make the most out of it. When it
come
Suggestion
comes
 to
food
, modern appliances have really contributed in making
food
preparation
 easier. It has helped in reducing the time it used to take to prepare three meals in a day. Another advantage is that now people can experiment and attempt to cook cuisines from all around the world. It makes their
food
 experiences richer. Ready to cook
food
 options are helping people while travelling on short trips away from home countries. Though some critics claim that
this
 modernity in
food
preparation
 has
lead
Suggestion
led
 to the dilution in
authenticity
Suggestion
the authenticity
 of cuisines. Some people
complaint
Suggestion
complain
complained
 about the health side effects as well. To summarize,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe ease in
preparion
make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc
preparing
preparation
 has made most people's lives easier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Modern appliances
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Cooking time
  • Nutritional value
  • Public health
  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural heritage
  • Food industry
  • Processed foods
  • Packaging waste
  • Social bonding
  • Culinary skills
  • International cuisine
  • Preservatives
  • Additives
  • Contamination
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