Some people say the only way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

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The key to happiness, as believed by some individuals, is to have
unfeterred
not bound by shackles and chains
unfettered
income to enjoy
life
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to the fullest. While I think that having
money
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in excess can make
life
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more comfortable, I
also
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believe that lots of other factors contribute to a fulfilled
life
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. On the one hand, being rich can never be quantified with living an average
life
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,
although
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an average earner might live comfortably, there are still certain type of
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
he can't afford.
Having lots of
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Open lots of money
Opening lots of money
Opened lots of money
Opens lots of money
Has lots of money opened
money
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open the door for respect, unplanned vacations, luxurious cars, fascinating gadgets, high fashion, invite to societal events, and a host of other side attractions accompanied
with
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by
having a gigantic income.
For example
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, I know of
man
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a man
men
the man
who gifts his
children five
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children, five
million
naira
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Naira
more
each, immediately after graduating from the university. I
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heard about another rich who bought a luxury car for his daughter after passing out from medical school.
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, other factors should
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be considered in the happiness of every person. Having children cannot be likened to any amount of
money
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in the world. The love from family members is
also
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of paramount importance, the precious time we make out for people. If we consider living
life
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without love, children, giving to charity, touching the
life
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of people positively, as well as having a good health, we would all know that to be happy in
life
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, a lot of things are included.
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, a very good neighbour of mine who was involved in a very terrible accident, lost the use of his legs afterwards and can now only get around with the use of a wheelchair. He became depressed due to the fact that he felt like he had no worth in
life
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anymore, but I found out that his family members never stopped caring for him and showing
him
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his
love, as though he didn't lose the use of his legs. I think the affection he got from his family gradually pulled him out of his depressed state because nobody in his house treated him like a handicap. He became lively once
again despite
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again, despite
the state he was in. In conclusion, being happy means different things to many people. Some people
attributes
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attribute
have attributed
happiness to the simple things in
life
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, while some others think that
money
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answers all things. It is of paramount importance to consider that spending time with our loved ones, remembering something as simple as birthdays of the people who are dear to us, and a host of other precious things,
also
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contributes to being happy, while having lots of
money
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can be a bonus to living a happy
life
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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