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Everyone should become vegetarian,because they do not need to eat to have a healthy diet. What extent do you agree or disagree?

#diet
Some people believe that, to maintain a healthy diet all of us ought to be eating only vegetables.
Although
 someone
prefer
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prefers
 to eat fish or meat, but in my opinion
,
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,
I
have completely agree
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have completely agreed
 with
this
 statement. Today's we are suffering from
lot
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a lot
 of diseases
,
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,
which creates
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on our health
as a result
 having
excessive amount
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excessive amounts
an excessive amount
 of food
such
 as meat, egg and fish.
For
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To
 mitigate
this
 issue we should eat vegetable, which contains all of the essential ingredients to keep fit our
body
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bodies
.
For example
, research
evident
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evidence
 that, an individual who is always
have
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having
 green food for their meals are far more healthy than others.
In addition
, fresh fruits and plants which
is consumed
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are consumed
 by the pupils convey the most important vitamins.These
vitamin
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vitamins
 could protect our health from virus and makes us healthier.
Furthermore
, a vegetarian man
have
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has
smooth brain
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a smooth brain
 and
wealthy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
 body.Because, fishes and
animals
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animal
animal's
animals'
 meat can increase our blood pressure, whereas the green plants can control
this
 level.Another reason is that, vegetable is much cheaper than it
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,
as a
consequence we
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consequence, we
 could purchase it within our budgeted money and keeps fit mentally and physically. In conclusion
,
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,
There I state and the recent evidence support several
reason
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reasons
to
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for
 consuming vegetables as our regular meal.That's why everyone should be a vegetarian.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vegetarian
  • healthy diet
  • health benefits
  • environmental benefits
  • ethical reasons
  • challenges
  • solutions
  • nutrition
  • sustainable
  • animal welfare
  • plant-based
  • vegan
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