Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop when they become adults. Why do so many adults stop physical exercise? What can be done to solve this problem?

Many people tend to play sports less than they used to do when they were younger.
This
trend is mainly due to a lack of
time
and opportunity to be engaged
with
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in
physical activities where they live.
However
, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve the
isse
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issue
. One of the reasons why people tend to cease to play sports when they grow up is that they are most likely to be very busy
for
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in
their
work
and parenting. Children usually have more free
time
compared to adult people, which
allowe
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
allow
allowed
allows
them to enjoy physical activities as much as they want with their peers. Workers,
on the other hand
, are most likely to be more committed to their family and tasks at
work
that keeps them occupied and,
as a result
, they seem to have less free
time
to play sports than young people. Another reason to cause adults people's lack of
phycial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
activities is that there is no appropriate facilities where they can
exercise
. In fact, being a
membership
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member
of gyms is usually costly and it is
not often affordable
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often not affordable
for people who are outside of well-off society.
However
, despite the lack of
time
and inexpensive service that people can enjoy playing sports, there are a number of ways to tackle the problem of shortage of adults exercises.
Firstly
, companies should strictly limit the
time
their employees
work
a day and give them opportunities to play sports offering gyms or courses related to sports
such
as yoga after
work
. If
heads
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the heads
of the companies set an annual competition of sports event like
marathon
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a marathon
, their subordinates will be able to more encouraged to
work
less than before and practice for the competition
Moreover
, the local government
also
can play an important role to motivate adults to
exercise
more.
For example
, they may be able to build free or budget-friendly amenities related to sports activities,
such
as
public swimming pool
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a public swimming pool
public swimming pools
, tennis
cort
an assembly (including one or more judges) to conduct judicial business
courts
court
and gyms, so that local people could
exercise
more easily that will lead to improvement of citizens' health. In short, the shortage of free
time
and place to
exercise
freely discourages
adults
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adult
people to play sports. Only when the local governments like
prefectural
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Prefectural
office are able to ensure that all citizens can enjoy playing sports with cost-effectively, will the issue of shortage of
exercise
be resolved.
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