Fewer people today visit museums than in the past. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more people to visit museums in the future?

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Despite the fact that people in olden times used to enjoy visiting museums, people in our modern society seem to be reluctant to come to museums.
This
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trend is mainly due to the expensive entrance fee
of
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to
museums and loss of interests of modern people's enthusiasm towards artworks and
history
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.
However
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, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to solve the
isse
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issue
.
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First reason
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The first reason
why people today no longer visit museums is that the fee to enter the museums is
most likely
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more likely
to be expensive.
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those fees from visitors tend to be used as a budget to maintain the quality of the
museum
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, it is still
unaffordable
that you have the financial means for
affordable
for people,
especialy
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
specially
for the ones from vulnerable society or students. Another factor that
prevent
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prevents
people from coming to museums is that young generations are less likely to be interested in artworks and
history
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comparing
to
being one more than one
two
people from
past
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the past
. Schools nowadays seem not to value the
History
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classes or Art classes but they are very keen only for science subjects,
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as Mathematics and Chemistry.
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, there are a number of ways to tackle the issue of people visiting museums less often.
Firstly
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, advertisement can be a key to motivate people to access to the museums. Museums must invest money to
attracts
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attract
people with better modern design. If people found the
museum
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very modernised, they will come to visit the
museum
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.
In addition
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, the governments
also
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could cover the maintenance fee to keep the
meseums'
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
qualities, so that visitors will feel more comfortable coming to observe the artworks and
history
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. In fact, there are some noble museums in the world are under the government's control,
such
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as the Great Britain
Museum
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in London that receive a vast amount of visitors every year. In short, a lack of people's enthusiasm towards
history
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and costly tickets to enter the museums often
demotivate
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people to learn in the
museum
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. Only when the
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
assure that museums
can keep
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can, keep
the good quality without getting money from visitors, will the museums be able to receive more people.
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