Media has a big role to play in the spread of any news and curiosity building. Which type of news do you feel media should give more focus to, good or bad?

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We are living in

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age where every adult is supposed to update himself instantly with the latest happenings and rapid changes. In fact, all of us are literally coping up with the news and information overload through various sources like television, internet, radio and newspaper. Any news, good or bad, catches a massive public attention if

media

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the media

gives

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give

more footage. Bad news is often broadcasted as "breaking news" on television news channels. Even in newspapers, it finds a prime location to catch

public's eye

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the public's eye

. Bad happenings or crime news catches early attention as it is different from usual, regular happenings. People are curious to know more and more about it as they think, "It can't happen to me." On the top of it, TV or print media often does hammering of the same news for an indefinite period of

time which

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time, which

makes people interested to know real-time developments in the news story. News on a serial-killing,

for instance

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, would make people quite desperate to know about the

further

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moves of the killer and efforts being made to catch him. Bad news

also

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gains publicity as it provides warning and alarming signals. Good news,

on the other hand

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, is related to technological advancements, sports, celebrity, events and so on.

Such

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news can be

further

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glamorised to catch more attention of the readers or listeners. It

definately

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

has a healthy impact on people's mind and is good for children too who are psychologically weaker to digest crude realities and shocking news. Even for the bad news, sometimes media

has

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have

to perform a

mildening

extremely annoying or displeasing

maddening

role by reducing the shock intensity to lessen the panic. I think

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the media

should focus on

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news that carries

weightage

a season's yield of wine from a vineyard

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to cause some kind of social development and is oriented to generate

awarness

having knowledge of

awareness

and consciousness in the burning issues of the society.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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305 words

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Media has a big role to play in the spread of any news and curiosity building. Which type of news do you feel media should give more focus to, good or bad?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people claim that genetically modified (GM) food can be dangerous while others feel that it may bring enormous benefits to the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Write about the following topic Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

many countries spend too much money on training of a few individuals for international sports competition. Some people believe that government should spend more in ordinary people instead. Do you agree r disagree? give your opinion and example