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Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

#people #attention #resources #protection #animals #birds
It is irrefutable that government has
number
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 of tasks to perform to protect different types of
species
 including humans. Excess care and more than the requirement of
resources
 are being deployed to protect wild animals and
birds
is
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said
by
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some people. In my opinion, I agree and believe that we should focus more on humans as
resources
 are limited. One reason is that we have many more serious challenges to cover
such
 as
safety
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the safety
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 of humans rather than focusing on
birds
 and wild animals. Poverty and lack of medicines against deadly infections are the major issues of the current
world
,
therefore
 the government must allocate more funds on
such
 issues to control the deaths of human
being
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beings
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.
For instance
, a survey from
World
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the World
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health organization
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Health Organization
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 revealed that every day uncounted people are dying because of poor living conditions and
lack
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 of medicines to cure
from
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fatal diseases like cancer and HIV. Another reason is that
extinction
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the extinction
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 of one
species
 from the
world
 has
limited
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a limited
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 effect on other
species
 and the environment,
thus
 spending huge money and other
resources
 to protect these
species
 is unjustified.
For example
,
disappearance
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the disappearance
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 of
species
dodo
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of dodo
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birds
 from
Malaysian
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a Malaysian
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 island has zero effect on other
species
 on that island.
Hence
, it is a wasteful approach to appoint numerous scientists
on
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to
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 the behaviour and study of
such
species
. In conclusion, human problems are more serious to cover and
resources
 are little in quantity.
However
,
vanishing
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the vanishing
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 of wild animals and
birds
 is not
effecting
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affecting
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to
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this
world
 at major levels,
therefore
, we should not give more focus and
resources
on
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to
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such
 issues.
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task response
Ensure that you fully address the prompt question and provide a clear stance. Include relevant examples and analyze the given topic in depth.
coherence cohesion
Improve the overall structure and flow of the essay by using appropriate linking words and organizing ideas logically. Ensure a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • species extinction
  • wildlife conservation
  • sustainable development
  • ecosystem services
  • habitat destruction
  • endangered species
  • conservation efforts
  • natural heritage
  • human encroachment
  • poaching
  • genetic diversity
  • climate change
  • environmental stewardship
  • protection measures
  • wildlife sanctuary
  • biological significance
  • conservation biology
  • environmental advocacy
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