Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

Before reaching a
conclusion we
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conclusion, we
must
first
look at the contributions that knowledge of
history
and
science
and
technology
has made to help us achieve the kind of sophisticated civilization we have now.
History
has taught us many things. There is no denying in that.
History
has imparted us with knowledge of our ancestors. Without knowledge of
history
, we won't be able to appreciate the contributions of our ancestors to make us what we are now today.
History
is like the hard disk of our beloved earth. Of course a system may run without its long-term memory with the help of short-term memory,
however
, it can easily be understood that
this
would seriously hamstring the capability of the system.
For instance
, if the generations that are to come remain oblivious to or ignorant of the horror of world wars, where will they find the motives to avert another
such
vicious war. The world without its
history
would have no means to learn from mistakes that our predecessors have made.
History
not only prevents us from
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
terrible
mistakes but
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mistakes, but
also
inspires future innovations. Take,
for instance
, had we not known about Mozart's great music compositions, we would have not had great compositions that were inspired by Mozart's.
Science
and
technology
are as important as anything can ever be. If not for
science we
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science, we
would still be living in caves.
This
statement alone can sum up the importance of
science
and
technology
.
Science
and
technology
have set us apart from other ordinary animals. If we are to sustain for good as a species I would not be wrong to assume it has to be the help of
technology
.
Thus
to conclude, I must say
history
and
science
and
technology
are equally important for us to flourish.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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