Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

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Before reaching a
conclusion we
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conclusion, we
must
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look at the contributions that knowledge of
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history
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and
science
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and
technology
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has made to help us achieve the kind of sophisticated civilization we have now.
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History
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has taught us many things. There is no denying in that.
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History
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has imparted us with knowledge of our ancestors. Without knowledge of
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history
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, we won't be able to appreciate the contributions of our ancestors to make us what we are now today.
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History
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is like the hard disk of our beloved earth. Of course a system may run without its long-term memory with the help of short-term memory,
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, it can easily be understood that
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would seriously hamstring the capability of the system.
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, if the generations that are to come remain oblivious to or ignorant of the horror of world wars, where will they find the motives to avert another
such
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vicious war. The world without its
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history
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would have no means to learn from mistakes that our predecessors have made.
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History
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not only prevents us from
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
terrible
mistakes but
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mistakes, but
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inspires future innovations. Take,
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, had we not known about Mozart's great music compositions, we would have not had great compositions that were inspired by Mozart's.
Science
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and
technology
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are as important as anything can ever be. If not for
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science we
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science, we
would still be living in caves.
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statement alone can sum up the importance of
science
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and
technology
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.
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technology
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have set us apart from other ordinary animals. If we are to sustain for good as a species I would not be wrong to assume it has to be the help of
technology
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.
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to conclude, I must say
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history
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and
science
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and
technology
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are equally important for us to flourish.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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