Despite the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

People around the world still suffer from hunger despite advancements in agriculture.
This
seemingly contradictory situation leaves us mulling over the possible reasons that lie behind. It is pretty obvious that one of the main reasons for
this
predicament has to do with the management and distribution of foods. Unequal distribution of income
thus
food
purchasing power might be the main reason why many people still suffer from
food
shortage.
This
leaves us with a unique situation
of on
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of, on
one
hand having
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hand, having
people who are suffering from obesity due to excessive
food
consumption,
on the other hand
, having people who are starving to death because of a lack of
food
availability. Another vital reason for
this
conundrum is the inefficient management of agricultural products. By management, I meant use, recycle, and preservation of perishable agricultural products. In any wealthy family more often than
not more
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not, more
food
is cooked than necessary. If you examine a dustbin you would probably see lots of foods are wasted that should be consumed. If people all over the world were
more miser
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a more miser
about wasting foods than the situation could be a lot better. To redress
this
problem I think it is imperative that the income gap be minimized. Governments should take steps to redistribute income in a
more evenly
Suggestion
more even
manner among general people. People, in general, should be more informed about the scarcity of foods so that everyone use/consume
food
more discreetly. Perishable
food
products should be kept in a more efficient way so that no
food
is wasted. The concerned regulatory body can set an upper limit of
food
products that a single consumer can purchase. Even though
this
strategy may seem a bit extreme,
however
, should be implemented if necessary. To
conclude I
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conclude, I
would say that the problem of
food
shortage may seem paradoxical, given the fact that the production of
foods
benefit
goods
has risen significantly over the years, with appropriate actions it can be solved.
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