Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While some people think that employee should be involved in business decisions, others argue that these decisions should be left to the people in key positions. In my opinion, I believe that

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when decisions are taken by higher

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because they have a better understanding and access to information about the

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of all, businesses work to make profits on the services they sell to customers. The top

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whose role is to make profits has in-depth access to the

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company

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information and the

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market

forecast.

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, junior

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has only knowledge about the

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department, they

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, it's important that only key people should be allowed to make decisions.

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, involving more people into critical decisions will slow down the decision-making

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, especially during the times

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time-critical decisions.

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, junior employees are a crucial part of the

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. Involving them in the decision-making

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helps them to feel that they are a part of the

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team.

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belief increases their responsibility and makes them more motivated towards the work.

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, I don't agree with the notion here that employees should be part of a business decision to increase their motivation. There are many other ways

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can explore to motivate their employees

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as promoting them, increasing salary

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and benefits, but

companies should not take decisions based on the

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employee

motivation. In conclusion, decisions should be taken by the upper

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as they have access to all the aspects of the

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. Involving, the employees in the decision-making

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will only delay the decision-making

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.

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, the primary goal of the

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is to make profits.