Some people say that mobile phones have made communication easier and more convenient. Other people say that mobile phones have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is a debatable issue of these days, a few numbers of people are of the opinion that mobile phones are useful for getting in touch, whereas others hold an opposite opinion. I believe that mobile phones have made life easier in many ways.

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essay will highlight the reasons to support my view.

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with, some people argue that using mobile phones

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many problems for

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human beings

which are

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to consider.

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, people can easily be distracted

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, a recent survey by the ministry of transportation found that more than 46% of car accidents during the past five years have been made by the drivers who used cell phones while driving.

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, scientists think that the radiation used in mobile phones can affect our health.

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, a study by the university of Michigan proved that villagers are less likely to have brain related diseases than people living in urban areas.

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, others think that

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almost new technology device has many benefits for everyone. In the

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place, people can easily get in touch by making a phone call,

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of travelling to meet each other.

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saves energy and time.

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, a person at work, could use his or her mobile phone to view his home, in order to make sure everything is good, without having to travel to home.

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, my neighbour whose

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has had dementia for the past four years, had to hire a nurse to take care of her

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an adult person who is male (as opposed to a woman)

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while she is at work.

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, to make assured that her

mom

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was in safe hands, she arranged her house to be equipped

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with

security cameras.

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, she can use her device when connected to

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the internet

to watch her lovely

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mom

informal term for a mother

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at home.

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but not least, people use their cell phones to arrange important meetings or appointments and

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leads them to have a more successful business. In conclusion

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even though mobile phones have some disadvantages

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I think they have many benefits for our daily life and improve life quality.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

352 words

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Some people say that mobile phones have made communication easier and more convenient. Other people say that mobile phones have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Include an introduction and conclusion

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