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Write about the following topic: Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. . Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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One of the important kind of renewable
energy
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 resources is Solar
energy
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. Given that the current condition of non-renewable
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 resources is critical the replacement of
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source
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 is a necessity and
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, solar
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 is becoming more and more popular. The sun's heat provides with the thermal
energy
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 which in turn is converted to electrical
energy
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. Since the sun's heat is available everywhere and at free of cost, it is used as a popular
source
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 of household
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.
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Once
 installed, the apparatus requires to only be maintained properly.
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, the installation of solar power is very expensive. It uses silver as a means for the
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 transformation and
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, it is not affordable by everyone.
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,
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 can't be installed in the places where the availability of the sun is very low.
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, near the poles where there is no sunlight for around six months, a solar panel could be of no use. In spite of these limitations, solar
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 is becoming a more popular
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 in many countries around the world which can be explained by the deteriorating rate of availability of non-renewable resources.
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, other renewable sources
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 as
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 can't be installed in any
house-holds
a social unit living together
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.
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, solar
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 acts as a compact and sufficient form of
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source
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